That hurt me just reading it. If you can"t take the time to use proper grammar in an application to a serious guild, what makes you think that you would take the time to properly play your character. when it comes to applying to guilds, you need to pull all the stops. Cross your T's and dot your I's. I haven't looked at your character yet and i'm afraid to. I'd say no right this second and if you want a serious consideration, clean it up.